First song ever!

As random as I always am, I was inspired to write a song today.. I've thought of doing it before but didnt actually get down to it. This time I managed to come up with something & hope it turned out alright ya.. Btw, it sounds more like a poem than a song but I wish I could strum in a tune for this though. :D

Us together by Naphalisia

Those walks in the park never seem like what it used to be,
Without you, it just never seemed right especially for me
I want you to know that the memories we shared were never done
And now that you're gone, I'll never know now what it could have been for you & I

Chorus:
I believe in fate that tied us together
You are my mate that I'll treasure even now & forever
In my life, it has never been a dream come true
But when it comes to you it's been so real, so surreal
It's like I just walked out of my dreams to see you.

I remember you once told me how much you loved me
I didn't know if it was real or if you meant it then
but it was then that I started falling so deep and strong that nothing else would matter
 So baby, why don't you feel the same now when I am still the same now and then?

The past has flashed passed and I am still here waiting for the moment
Where you'll turn back and know not all is lost.
 Its a rollercoaster ride but it will be worth the wait in the haven
So baby we'll make it work, you know that we will, at all costs.